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After that lovely little cliff hanger, I present to you... AN EPIC BATTLE!!!!! Who will win? The Icey-Haired Human Boy, or the Golden-Eyed Wolven Girl? You shall find out soon enough... >83

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Our sabers clash in mid air, sending sparks flying in all directions. I lept back, breaking the deadlock and he ran forward again, swinging in an X motion over and over again. I quickly sidestep him and take a quick swing at his neck which he blocks easyly. Smirking he charges again with a series of swipes and jabs. I duck and weave through all of them, saber swirling wildly. He glares at me but advances again, this time taking a more direct approach. 'Big Mistake Ice boy.' I think grinning. I duck his swing and leap behind him getting three hits on his shoulders. Wincing he whirls around getting angry, but that doesn't scare me. Anger is your enemy, Master Yoda would always say. It will get you nowhere. He took another jab at me, this time hitting my side. I clench my teeth ignoring the pain and leaping over his head I grab onto his shoulders forcing him to loose his balance. He falls to the ground with a satisfying 'umf!' I grinn and leap back over placing my saber at his throat. The elderly Jedi was about to end the battle when that sneeky little cheat mustered up a giant force push. He sent my flying and crashing into the wall then falling to the ground. I shake my head, forcing myself up when he walked over, clipping his saber back to his belt. He extended his hand, pushing me back to the ground with another force push. The elderly Jedi began to speak, "Telos Aiboh! What are yo-" I think he saw the look in my eyes, the determination silenced him. I raise my own hand, fighting the enormous weight of the force crashing down upon me. Managing to get to my feet, I stagered forward, forcing him back. "I'm not so easyly defeated Telos. You should know that already." I said calmly, the effort not showing in my face or voice. "ENOUGH!" I dropped my hand immediately, as did the white-haired boy. We both turned to look at the Jedi Master who was standing, ready to intervene. "I've seen more than enough. Thank you both." We both grinn and bow. I think our rivalry could be sensed in the air. "Josephine, could we please talk?" The Jedi Master said smiling brightly.
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Alright, sorry for all that crap. Hopefully the next one will be better. :/
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The Jedi Master

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Yay! Hoot my love this is for you~ So yush, Jo moves on in her journey to become a Jedi. >83 Well, almost. But I can't tell you that! Spoilers! I mean, unless you happened to read my first story with Jo {her death} then you already know... but whatever, on with the story!

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I glanced over to the man, smiling shyly. He looked at each of us, trying to read our emotions I suppose, after looking over every youngling he whispered something into the elderly Jedi's ears. He nodded and watched as the strange Jedi master left the room. After a few seconds her turned and spoke. "Will Joesephine Tainn and Telos Aiboh step forward." I step forward feeling rather shocked. I turn to see at the other youngling, a tall human boy with icey white hair, a look of confidence on his face. "You two will be fighting in front of Master Fen. He has come to choose a padawan, and he found you two rather interesting." My ears prick up with the word interesting. 'Interesting? What's that supposed to mean?' I shake the thought out of my head and look back to the boy to find him grining wickedly. The look in his eyes made me shiver, but I didn't let it show, I put on a mask of determination. There was no way this guy was going to get the better of me. "Alright you two, go on to the training room and get ready." We nod and race off to prepare ourselves for the upcoming battle.

A few minutes later we're both ready and anxious just to get started. I pick up one of the training sabers, the one I always use. It's rather simple, but it's light-weight and well balanced. 'Alright Jo, don't mess this up!' There's a small crowd of younglings and even a few Knights gathering around the edges of the training room. A soft gong sounds, the signal to advance onto the "battle ground". We both whirl around, stepping forward. He ignites his lightsaber, an icey blue color, swirling it tauntingly. I just grin and ignite mine. It glows a warm golden color just like my eyes. "Begin!" Says the elderly Jedi. Not wasteing a second we both dash forward.
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Introductions

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Upon request from my friend Hoothead, I'm writing more about my character Jo! Yay! Urm... I have no idea what's going to end up on this page... so bare with me. ^.^"
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~ Introductions

"Um... hi!" I say nervously to the other younglings around me. They've all got friends already, seeing that they've been here for years. Well, whatever, who needs friends anyways.

- Oh, right sorry, I'm Josephine Tainn, Eleven year old Wolven youngling here in the Jedi Temple on Coruscant. I've been living alone on the streets since I was seven, that's probably why they had such a hard time finding me. Alrighty, know that you know who I am, let's get back to the story! -

I look around the room just observing my surroundings when I see here. A small human, around my age sitting alone in the corner. 'Hm, she seems friendly enough, but why's she alone like that?' I think to myself, making my way over to her. "H-hi there." I say softly. She glances up, a bit frightened. She had been reading a book about some battle. "Um, hi..." She says awkwardly. I smile trying my best to be friendly. "Hi, I'm Josephine, b-but you can call me Jo." She smiles seeing that I'm just as nervous as she is. "I'm Kat, just Kat." I grin, overjoyed that I finally have a friend. "So what are you doing, just sitting here all alone. You seem pretty nice." She sighed, seeming a little sad now. "No one talks to me, actually, you're the first yougling that's ever had a decent conversation with me." Eyebrows raised a shake my head. "I'm surprised you're not the most popular one here." Glancing over me shoulder and sneer and turn back to Kat. "You're definatly the nicest one here." She grined but before she could say a word an elderly Jedi stepped inside the room. "Everyone line up! We have a special visitor today!" Everyone shuffled in place, facing the doorway. That was when he entered. Tall, long brown hair kept in a pony-tail. He had an air of importance around him, but he smiled kindly and spoke in his deep soothing voice. "Hello Younglings."
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Well, not many people read Part 1. {Actually no one read it.} Gee thanks everybody. Well, I'm keeping it on here in case anyone decides to take a peak.

~ Death Day : Part 1

The smoke could be seen all the way from the slums of Coruscant, billowing above the temple in huge black clouds. I watched from the window, feeling their force signatures disappearing one by one. "Serves them right, trusting those lab rats from Kamino." I turned, walking from the window and heading downstairs when it hit me. Her voice, screaming out amidst the others. She was in trouble. Kat!


~ Death Day : Part 2

I lept down, skipping most of the stairs in my way, running for the speeder, ignoring the owner's yells of protest as I zipped away. Come one you stupid machine. After a few minutes of ducking and weaving cars and other veichles of that sort I was at the temple. It was quite a sight, Jedi fighting for their lives against the army of clones invading their precious temple. "Joesephine! Hurry!" I heard her call in my mind. She never lost that ability, not even after I fell to the Dark Side.


~ Death Day : Part 3

I ran into the halls, red saber slashing this way and that, blocking the beams from the clones. Then I spotted her, standing there fighting him. Anakin Skywalker. Around them in a circle stood clones, guns aimed and ready to fire. I ran forward dodging the blaster fire and slashing wildly aiming for their hearts and heads. "I knew you'd come!" Said my old friend, grinning. But she hadn't known, I could tell by the look of releif in her eyes. "Just shut up and go." A startled look in her eyes. "Run you idiot! I'll take care of him!"


~ Death Day : Part 4

I waited until her footsteps fade in the distance and then ignited my second saber. "Well Anakin, I was right after all." I let out a harsh laugh. "Qui-gon owes me Ten Credits." He snarled, swirling his saber and advancing. I close my eyes calling the force to my aid and leap forward over him slashing wildly, a whirlwind of Red and Gold, but he sensed it. He leaps out of the way a sly, bloodthirsy grin on his face. "My god Anakin, what have they done to you?" I sigh and shake my head. "No matter, I'm putting an end to this. Here and now."



~ Death Day : Part 5

He smirked overconfidence rolling off of him in waves. "I highly doubt that Joesephine, the little girl who's prophecies no one ever beleived." He paused. "Or ever will." I growled chaging forward, letting my sabers clash with his, sending sparks flying out in every direction. He stepped back and took a few swipes at me, I backflipped out of the way. I pause for a second, sensing Kat's force signature fade along with one of the temple's ships. Good, she's safe now. That was my mistake. He mustered up a huge force push, slamming me against the wall. I fall to the floor, coughing up blood. "Goodbye, Joesephine Tainn." He lifts me up with a force choke, that bloodthirsty look in his eyes evem more evident. "Y-you w-will... die Skywalker." I grin, glaring into his eyes with difiance. That was when it he did it. I hung in the air for a moment, then fell to the ground with a sickening thud. Yes, the hall was littered with the bodies of Clone Troopers and Jedi. And now my own.
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So, I've been really into Star Wars for some reason lately, and I felt like posting my character's death scene. I dunno, I just felt like it, so bare with me. I'll post the rest if people request it. :3

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Death Day : Part One

The smoke could be seen all the way from the slums of Coruscant, billowing above the temple in huge black clouds. I watched from the window, feeling their force signatures disappearing one by one. "Serves them right, trusting those lab rats from Kamino." I turned, walking from the window and heading downstairs when it hit me. Her voice, screaming out amidst the others. She was in trouble. "Kat!"
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